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Humanities Grammar Handbook
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fragments 7 Run-on sentences 8 Verb agreement 13 Passive voice 15 ESL 17 Misplaced modifiers 18 Pronoun reference 20a Comparisons 21 Parallel construction 23 Commas 23d Sexist language 25/6 Semicolons & colons 29 Ellipsis 31 Brackets 35 Apostrophes 36 Abbreviations 37 Underlining 39 Numbers 41b Slang 41e Jargon 41f Pretentious language 42c Idioms 42e Clichés 43a Fluff |
29 Ellipsis
Only use evidence which is necessary to illustrate the point you are making.
When eliminating unnecessary information, use ellipsis to indicate you are
leaving part of the quotation out.
Excessive quotation: Criticising the Cyclopes for their lack of political organization, Odysseus noted that "... these people have no institutions, no meetings for counsels; rather they make their habitations in caverns hollowed among the peaks of the high mountains, and each one is the law for his own wives and children, and cares nothing about the others ..." (Odyssey, 140)
Revised sample: Criticising the Cyclopes for their lack of political organization, Odysseus noted that "these people have no institutions, no meetings for counsels; . . . and each one is the law for his own wives and children" (Odyssey, 140)
Note: You don't need ellipsis before and after a quotation, since it's clear you're omitting material at either end of the quotation.